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burn out

by Nanette Bellman

sometimes i know the stars
in the Heavens
sre going to come crashing down
and when they do-
all i want is for you to hold me

12/19/2003

Posted on 12/19/2003
Copyright © 2024 Nanette Bellman

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 12/19/03 at 04:39 PM

Simple and to the point. The msg. is well pronounced in no uncertain terms.

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 02/15/04 at 04:46 PM

This is heavely romance. What a beautiful thought of someone Nanette. I love it.

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 02/15/04 at 04:46 PM

This is heavenly romance. What a beautiful thought of someone Nanette. I love it.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/06/06 at 07:50 PM

Enjoyed your writing here. Thanks for the read.

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