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by Quinlan L Gibson

She saw his face and only had to look him in the eyes
for all of thirty seconds as his hands slid down her thighs.
Her body shook, her head tilt back
she’d waited to have this attack for years.
Immediately she felt herself, all his, reduced to tears.
His hands felt like two burning flames
they searched her every space and claimed it
as his very own.
In between tastes her sweet juice
a torrid passion then let loose;
tore at the sheets and mussed the bed.
He gripped her as she’d suffocate
while gasping underneath his weight
all the while she’s wanting more,
though his name she never said.
They devoured one another, open wide and undercover
intense and primal lovers and to some their state a shame.
He took her into rapture, she became his capture
Cost of one brief night of fame? She will never say his name.

12/17/2003

Author's Note: i guess this is the "her rebuttal" on the Stain piece...something in me saw it on the other foot and made me write about it.

Posted on 12/18/2003
Copyright © 2024 Quinlan L Gibson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ginette T Belle on 12/18/03 at 01:21 AM

hot and lovely...beautiful flow...

Posted by Aaron Howard on 12/18/03 at 08:12 PM

Great piece.. reminds me of how primal writing can be able sexual content, but still remaining tasteful.. Awesome content.. love it!

Posted by Susan Q Tomas on 12/18/03 at 11:18 PM

Truly captivating.

Posted by Rachelle Howe on 12/19/03 at 07:45 PM

*GUSH* damn. THREE libia, WAY up. damn. damndamndamndamndamndamn.

Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 12/22/03 at 12:02 AM

Intense indeed and primal for sure.....very tastefully done.

Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 12/22/03 at 03:33 PM

They devoured one another, open wide and undercover intense and primal lovers and to some their state a shame. He took her into rapture, she became his capture and for their one brief night of fame, she can never say his name. .........great lines.........good flow.....i love that this is a woman who is being ravaged, yet i feel that she is not powerless, not a victim. a good read, quinlan

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