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soul
by Ginette T Bellelast nite i was reminded of you
through new blood
oscillating colour
blinding vision, mind, body
yes my memory pounded from the flood
brought on by the vivid explosion
level with my black eyes - clouding over 12/17/2003 Author's Note: just found this in my room on a piece of paper...i wrote probably about a month ago...it's unfinished or maybe not...let me know...
Posted on 12/17/2003
Copyright © 2025 Ginette T Belle
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Richard Trotter on 12/17/03 at 11:37 PM interesting read, it does feel unfinished as it seems to build and then stop, though I think if you dropped "clouding over" from the last line it would be a more fitting ending. either way its quite atmospheric and colourful. |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 12/18/03 at 01:24 AM oh Ginette, this is fantastic, as all your work is. |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 12/18/03 at 06:15 PM wow. jesus. incredible. |
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