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Blue Paper and Origami Swans

by Britt Zimmerman

She swims in blue paper
with origami swans
and pinwheel flowers
She laughs,
getting carried away
by the snapdragons
that whisper in her ears


Posted on 12/15/2003
Copyright © 2024 Britt Zimmerman

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/15/03 at 07:27 PM

this is so vivid and colorful, delightful.

Posted by Kimberly Bare on 12/15/03 at 07:42 PM

very whimsical...I like this!

Posted by Deborah S Regan on 01/28/04 at 09:35 PM

this is a really lovely poem!

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 02/22/06 at 08:46 PM

Melodic, and summerlike...refreshing! Congrats on potd.

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