pathetic.org :: Blue Paper and Origami Swans by Britt Zimmerman

{ pathetic.org }

Blue Paper and Origami Swans

She swims in blue paper
with origami swans
and pinwheel flowers
She laughs,
getting carried away
by the snapdragons
that whisper in her ears

12/15/2003

Posted on 12/15/2003
Copyright © 2024 Britt Zimmerman

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/15/03 at 07:27 PM

this is so vivid and colorful, delightful.

Posted by Kimberly Bare on 12/15/03 at 07:42 PM

very whimsical...I like this!

Posted by Deborah S Regan on 01/28/04 at 09:35 PM

this is a really lovely poem!

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 02/22/06 at 08:46 PM

Melodic, and summerlike...refreshing! Congrats on potd.

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004	Terms and Conditions of Use	0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors.		Page Generated In 0 Second(s)