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Winter's Dance
by Adrian CalhounDancing effortlessly,
floating on air.
A million partners share the stage,
embracing with ease.
Ever so gently nestling together,
until all are gracefully seated.
No longer dancing upon the breeze,
sharing this blanket of white.
Like dreams of childhood fantasy,
winters delight has arrived.
The snow, has fallen. 12/13/2003 Author's Note: We had flakes as big as quarters at times. It was a beautiful thing to watch. Since I was out in it for most of the night, I got to watch a lot of it LOL.
Posted on 12/14/2003
Copyright © 2024 Adrian Calhoun
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michelle Calhoun on 12/14/03 at 04:41 AM What a beautiful way to capture the imagery of our freshly fallen snow. I especially love the last 4 lines of the 1st stanza. It reminds me of Shakespeare. Wonderful and vivid read. I can picture it in my minds eye. Good word Sweetheart.
And NO I am not biased, lol. XOXOXO |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/15/03 at 01:41 AM Very visual! Watching the 'dance of snow' can be great enjoyment especially when the flakes are large! Enjoyed the read! |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 01/08/04 at 02:50 AM A treasure of a poem...thank you Adrian I love these glimpses of winter white this year!!!! |
| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 03/25/08 at 03:17 AM Very Nice read that I can relate to..the imagery was excellent |
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