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redemption of a fallen cloud
by Kalikala Smithgod i think does care
and after ranting and raving and realizing
how very foolish i have been
i've come to a couple of general conclusions
that stem from nebulous thoughts
and streams of consciousness
that don't really make much sense
but who knows and who cares.
i am none other than me..
and i've made mistakes
and i will continue making mistakes.
this is inevitable.
i am crazy. i've gone completely insane.
and so there am i.
i don't expect
people to understand
or even remotely comprehend
what's happening.
i just need away.
i need away
i need away
i need redemption.
12/09/2003 Posted on 12/10/2003
Copyright © 2025 Kalikala Smith
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Matt Forget on 12/10/03 at 01:10 AM I know how you feel. I really do...if you need to talk to me...I'll be available. |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 12/10/03 at 01:54 AM It is good to realise that ultimately u are ur own best friend and that u must love urself.Doesn't mean u have to be selfish but u have to have that space for urself and try to understand oneself more like a best friend.Anyways nice write,Kalikala. |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 12/10/03 at 02:45 AM i agree with you - i think we do live the same life b/c this seems to echo with a familiar ring through my mind and heart- |
| Posted by John Harder on 12/10/03 at 04:38 PM i hear ya. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/10/03 at 10:45 PM Accept your mistakes and move on... that's redemption. Learning to accept yourself.... even those parts of you that you may not like. That's redemption. That's my opinion, anyway. Great verse... I love the repetition at the end. |
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