| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/09/03 at 06:06 AM this poem is brilliant!!!... i love the parrallels... your first line is timeless.. excellent piece... blessings... |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 12/10/03 at 09:20 PM Brilliant is definitely a good word. An examination of life day-by-day all in one moment, which is a fascinating way to express the theme of the poem beyond just the words. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/15/03 at 03:35 AM Weathered Roadmaps. What a powerful visual. This verse really speaks to all those that deal with mortality. Great crafting. |
| Posted by Sam Roberts on 12/20/03 at 12:55 AM The first line was remarkable, as was the whole poem. The last stanza was especially powerful, lovely imagery. Sam xxx |
| Posted by Leandra K Brossard on 01/13/04 at 03:44 AM Beautiful, I echo the prior sentiments... :) I also enjoy all the parrallels you have used and the language of this piece.. Thank you.. |
