she by Rachelle Howelimbs, sharp timbers,
promises of fallen angels and
forshadowed laments screamed
their forgotten trembles,
shattered in the wake
of those lovers who had
forsaken thoughts:
eternal damnation,
all for one moment's security.
there were countless ages,
swallowed, dismembered,
sold for pretenses and obscurities.
but she,
she was the dusk,
making heaven jealous
of all that she could do,
all that could never be
undone.
she came like the ocean
but when she moved
when she moved
she settled
like the sun. 12/07/2003
Author's Note: formerly, "and she said, breathe it into words" because i fucking hate that title, and this piece is pissing me off. thank you for loving the ending, however, THAT is the only part i'm rather fond of. my beginning, and damning, point.
Posted on 12/07/2003 Copyright © 2024 Rachelle Howe
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/09/03 at 07:14 PM Beautiful imagery... the differences between and day and night mixed within the flesh. Exquisite! |
Posted by Ginette T Belle on 12/12/03 at 02:36 AM i agree with aiko...the ending is beautiful... |
Posted by Mo Couts on 06/01/11 at 07:48 PM The ending of this is beautiful, but knowing what I know of your work, I'm not surprised to find that to be the case. awesome job. |
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