first stanza is awesome...that's what drew me...the stanza that starts "i've been dying lately..." is great as well...the ryhming works...the rest of the stanzas are not as powerful as those two but...it altogether it's actually pretty good
wow, 77! It's quite amazing that you would still have a song from 77. And a brilliant one at that, each stanza flows into the next which is incredibly hard to do. Nice, you should record an mp3 and play it to me! I wanna hear!