live as the oak (a haiku)

by Kimberly Bare

through the storm
weathered and weary
blooming still


Posted on 12/04/2003
Copyright © 2022 Kimberly Bare

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Agnes Eva on 12/04/03 at 11:20 PM

excellent haiku- the tenaciousness of nature, of its beauty! just one thing- haiku don't have titles, so I would suggest working the subject into the haiku itself, so the haiku stands alone

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