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Fog on the Mirror

by Melina Raven Maness Diebold

The hot shower

Leaves fog along

The mirror

 

I wipe my hand

Across the glass

Smearing the condensation

 

Then I see my face

Peering back

Wet hair dripping water

Like my eyes

 

I don’t like

What I see

So

I use my

Breath to fog up

The mirror

Once again

12/02/2003

Posted on 12/02/2003
Copyright © 2024 Melina Raven Maness Diebold

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Richard D Frederick on 12/02/03 at 11:44 PM

i do that too, sometimes.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/10/03 at 11:06 PM

Fogging the glass to cover up what you don't want to see. Intriguing images that show an honest introspection. I hope one day you will be able to clear the condensation and smile.

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