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by Ginette T Belle

eyes saucer-blue stare
tortured, bleeding with longing
potency beneath

12/02/2003

Posted on 12/02/2003
Copyright © 2024 Ginette T Belle

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/04/03 at 02:03 PM

ah, perfect haiku about a hobbit... i think?... lol... good job :)

Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/08/03 at 11:28 PM

bleedimg with longing... interesting way to make feelings and emotions real by giving them living characteristics. Exquisite verse. Lord of the Rings fan, eh?

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