**topic* you never were good at charades
by Kimberly Bare
were lost on you
trying to show
and pleading sighs
i should have rented
a neon sign
to catch your wandering eye
"actions speak louder than words"
Author's Note: Thanks to Stephanie Laubscher for a great topic!
Posted on 11/30/2003
Copyright © 2022 Kimberly Bare
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Stephanie Kent on 12/01/03 at 03:47 PM|
ooh, I love it:) very clever, powerful last stanza...wonderful.
|Posted by Dana E Brossard on 12/02/03 at 07:31 PM|
**chuckles** Very nice, sadly I'm one of those who needs neon signs sometimes =) Very nice piece you have created