| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/02/03 at 03:36 PM Awesome contrasts that is full of motion and then a sudden stop. Great use of words that leaves an impact on the reader. :) |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 12/30/03 at 04:36 AM great economy of word. with a touch so familiar. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 03/16/04 at 08:23 AM ooo... sends shivers up my arms and down my spine... just lovely... blessings... |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/23/09 at 05:16 PM This made me smile! What a lovely piece.Really enjoyable read and and lovely write! |
