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tijuana, imaginary
by Indigo Tempestaa hot image of everything which is alive
a hot neon scream at night
the music of nighttime streets
evaporating
condensing on bodies that,
hot,
deliver confusion from this place to that
here to there
hot bodies in the hot confines
of the howling city sky 11/28/2003 Posted on 11/29/2003
Copyright © 2025 Indigo Tempesta
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Sarah Brookes on 11/29/03 at 12:55 PM Whirlwind images. Sexual and Feral...there's something slightly nightmarish about certain images you suggest.
I think the first line is a tad jumbled, it doesn't roll off the tongue like everything else..
"deliver confusion from this plae to that
here to there
hot bodies in the hot confines
of the howling city sky"
on the other hand was fantastic. |
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