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by Leslie Ann Eisenberg

slow motion embers

burn holes in my skirts

teardrops moisten molten sin

scarlet petals peel me open and

I am bumblebee feet glued to hot nectar

11/26/2003

Author's Note: .

Posted on 11/29/2003
Copyright © 2024 Leslie Ann Eisenberg

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 11/30/03 at 02:29 AM

The impression sounds 'effective', capable of causing yet another 'effect'. You have succeeded in transmitting the vibrations.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/01/03 at 05:13 AM

Whew warm in here....Charlie

Posted by Rebecca Lin on 11/30/05 at 01:24 AM

Whoa... powerful imagery...lovely choice of words!

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 12/24/14 at 09:38 PM

Yes, I agree, an entirely different feel from my "Already", but lovely, and striking images and feel. I like it!

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