slow motion embers burn holes in my skirts teardrops moisten molten sin scarlet petals peel me open and I am bumblebee feet glued to hot nectar 11/26/2003
11/26/2003
Posted on 11/29/2003Copyright © 2024 Leslie Ann Eisenberg
The impression sounds 'effective', capable of causing yet another 'effect'. You have succeeded in transmitting the vibrations.
Whew warm in here....Charlie
Whoa... powerful imagery...lovely choice of words!
Yes, I agree, an entirely different feel from my "Already", but lovely, and striking images and feel. I like it!