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Imaginary Friends

by Cole Miller

1.

How do you convince
Imaginary friends that
Theyre real, let me know

2.

Tell me, how do you
Convince imaginary
Friends that they are real

3.

How do you convince
Imaginary friends that
Theyre real(?), I need help

11/24/2003

Author's Note: alright. so its all 5-7-5. but i need help, which wording sounds better? i like the third one best i think. I've got a terrible case of having an imaginary friend. cept this one has a phone number and an address, so its a little worse. bah. any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. okay guys, its been massively decided, its number two by a landslide. thanks. ---bjb---

Posted on 11/25/2003
Copyright © 2024 Cole Miller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 11/25/03 at 09:29 PM

#1, without "let me know" for sure...clever piece Cole

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