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Then vs Now
by Cole Milleryou then
me then
we then
us then
back when
we were a we
what has
happened
so that
you now
me now
but not
we now
and not
us now
not now
11/20/2003 Posted on 11/20/2003
Copyright © 2024 Cole Miller
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 11/20/03 at 08:41 PM getting it out is the hardest part, nice job, i can see the reworkings will make it fantastic. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/21/03 at 07:35 PM There is a rhythm to this banter that can be played with in the mind. It sounds wonderful when spoken aloud. Great read. |
| Posted by Kate Swearingen on 05/16/04 at 11:54 PM I agree with Amelia--I definitely love the simplicity of it. It's not junk to me at all...just a simple idea that is expressed in an amazing way. I like! |
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