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Velvet Rain

by William Teo

Velvet rain
a girl call rayn
like sandman's grains
a girl insane
the girl call rayn
in the velvet rain
the velvet girl
in velvet rain

What a world!
a world insane
a world in a
Velvet Rain

11/21/2003

Author's Note: random muses to amuse my friend

Posted on 11/20/2003
Copyright © 2024 William Teo

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 04/28/04 at 05:16 AM

i too dig the rhyme scheme... has a lofty feel to it :)

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