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I'm around.. just not around here. (haiku)
by Jolie JordanIf I had something
significant to say,
I would write haikus. 11/15/2003 Posted on 11/16/2003
Copyright © 2024 Jolie Jordan
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Lauren Singer on 11/16/03 at 05:24 AM awesome. |
| Posted by S. Elizabeth on 01/08/05 at 07:20 AM I'm smiling and this is brilliance. Favorited. |
| Posted by Paul Marino on 11/18/05 at 11:08 PM i love this...and that comma counts as the seventh syllable in the second line. that's brilliant. i like how you gave respect to haikus also, whether intended or not. |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 02/28/11 at 07:23 PM ME TOO!!!!! LOL :) Playful poetry is great fun, much peace n many haiku to u ;) ~jewels xoxox |
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