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Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/14/03 at 04:07 PM Inhibtions drop and the adventure begins. Suggestive and yet the main character has taken responsibilty for her own actions and greets the encounter in readiness. Exquisite verse with wonderful imagery! |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/14/03 at 04:08 PM Wonderful imagery Leslie. Sounds like great determination to leave the past and start with a new positive beginning. |
Posted by Ginette T Belle on 11/14/03 at 04:13 PM "here thirsty my blood runs faster"...i love this line...this poem is an awakening well expressed... |
Posted by Kimberly Bare on 11/14/03 at 08:45 PM the title drew me in with curiousity...and every well placed word held me captive! Very Well Done... |
Posted by Kara Hayostek on 11/15/03 at 05:50 PM I love poems like these, well written words with lots of imagery and no fluff. The font was somewhat difficult to read I feel it enhances the over all effect. |
Posted by Don Coffman on 11/18/03 at 04:11 AM Full of energy, subtle and steady. Many wonderful images and sensations here. |
Posted by Carl Walker on 05/31/05 at 10:04 AM escaping my core beliefs came when combat and death greeted me, and I immediately had another set of core beliefs, more thought out, less subject to my own whims of what others wanted me to be, for me ....it was a good trade. hope yours was/is for you can always get another set if the ones you have suit you not. excellent poem |