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Dreamed of a Kiss

by Melina Raven Maness Diebold

I dreamed of a kiss

that I blew to you

I dreamed that I missed

it went right over you

It sank through the mist

of the efferescent dew

Caused my heart to reminisce

Of the days of me and you

Our joys were a list

though oft I was blue

Made my insides twist

Thinking back on you

I strangled the kiss in my fist

In honor of the things you do

I felt its energy dismiss

and then my lips began to rue

Anger tremored down through my wrist

I picked up a pen and drew

a singular smile that hissed

a caricature of you

The fruit of Fall and Summer's Tryst

and dainty-lacy frost fell through

the frigid air full and amiss

with wint'ry memories of you

11/13/2003

Author's Note: i put it under ghazal as it's almost one. The first 2 lines need to rhyme, but the rest goes right.

Posted on 11/14/2003
Copyright © 2026 Melina Raven Maness Diebold

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/14/03 at 07:35 PM

The flow of this verse is extraordinary. The meshing of nature with matters of the heart is masterfully intricate. Great read.

Posted by Lisa-Dawn Sparling on 04/01/04 at 04:05 AM

I agree, great read and well written. It flows so smoothly and eloquently.

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