|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/12/03 at 07:11 PM|
Masterfully woven verse that speaks of a resilience of spirit. Great words that flow as smoothly as a song. Great read.
|Posted by Kate Demeree on 11/12/03 at 07:44 PM|
Sometimes the wait (weight) is more than you think you can bare... What is it about a poem like this that is so poingent.. so bittersweet that it makes one want to smile and cry at the same time... Beautifly Written!
|Posted by Emily Sullivan on 11/13/03 at 01:42 AM|
nicely put dad..love em
|Posted by Shy Leigh on 11/15/03 at 12:37 AM|
Wow..this was amazing. Wonderful job. Extremely enjoyed.--Shy
|Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 12/20/03 at 08:35 AM|
i know this all to well
|Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 04/21/04 at 11:20 AM|
I see that you wrote this a very long time ago... (I hope you're not still waiting!) This is a very well crafted piece and it flows beautifully. The message is one that we can all relate with.. that feeling of needing to let go but not wanting to. You captured that well here. Nicely done!