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Slave...(Triple Haiku)
by J. P. DaviesYou've lost all hope now
feet flirting with the edges
lean into soft wind
falling is escape
leave the bitter world behind
suits and ties are chains
You just couldn't fight
So it's instict to take flight
marry the pavement 11/10/2003 Author's Note: I watched Fight Club yesterday and it inspired me to write Haikus..lol "I began writing cute little Haiku Poems and sent them to everone..."
Edward Norton
Posted on 11/10/2003
Copyright © 2024 J. P. Davies
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 11/10/03 at 11:42 PM Very fight club-y, I like it. The middle stanza is my favourite. |
| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 11/13/03 at 06:07 AM I love Haikus and these are excellent |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 11/13/03 at 10:59 PM very, very cool...:) |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/13/03 at 11:23 PM Slaves to material possessions and corporate America! ....you are not a special butterfly... sorry, couldn't resist at least one Fight Club quote. Great triple Haiku. |
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