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Lunar Car Ride

by Deanna M Gritsonis

Looking
Up as you drove
Seeing the lunar moon
The red tint reminding me
I find that all that matters
Is this moment
Of passion for life
My eyes tear because
I am looking at the
True purity
My mind and eyes can not stop
My eyes wonÂ’t close at all
That seeing that beauty
Feed the feelingÂ…
Passion

11/09/2003

Author's Note: I can't just stop seeing it all....

Posted on 11/10/2003
Copyright © 2024 Deanna M Gritsonis

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jared Winkler on 11/10/03 at 08:01 AM

Uh oh.

Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 11/15/03 at 12:53 AM

A beautiful moment to lost in...excellent read

Posted by Bethany Lee on 07/08/05 at 08:06 PM

the title drew me in...

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