The First Snow by Thomas K. HuntThe crispness of Saturday morning with autumn now a dream
Frozen crystal feathers on the pane form a wintry scene
Escaping the warmth of my blankets I’d skate across that cold wooden floor
Waking all the others as I darted past their doors
I’d run for the door without a thought and my mom would get so mad
Get in here right now mister before I get your dad
The first snow had fallen and I couldn’t feel the cold
Outside in my pajamas now I understand her scold
I couldn’t wait to get ready as I opened the closet in the hall
All my winter coverings smelled of musk and old mothballs
My mittens on a string to lace through my woolen coat
My scarf around my neck to keep the cold off my throat
Snow pants in my boot tops to keep me warm and dry
My mom would put my hat on last right down to the top of my eyes
In a flash, I was out the door whirling in white powder fluff
Laughing with every tumble, man, I just loved that stuff
Rolling three giant snowballs each one bigger than the next to form our yards guardian
He was better than all the rest
We’d grab our sleds and saucers and head for Manitauk Hill
The rich kids had toboggans and for one of those I’d kill
Sledding down that mountainside as far as I could go
Lost within my winter fun so thankful for that snow
When the day was over just before my time to go
I’d lie down in a cloud of white to form an angel in the snow
With rosy cheeks and runny nose I’d yell out, “mom I’m home”
I’d get undressed and warm myself with hot cocoa and marshmallow foam
11/08/2003
Author's Note: Ahhhhh, the days of my youth
Posted on 11/08/2003 Copyright © 2025 Thomas K. Hunt
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Beth K Hannah on 11/09/03 at 03:11 AM the imagery and flow is really good. It made me picture and remember many of my own expeditions. |
Posted by Julie Adams on 11/09/03 at 11:11 PM there is an innocence threaded through this poem, and it is one I can relate to, there is an ageless appeal, memories are such an attic for us to explore, well done...peace |
Posted by Kate Demeree on 11/10/03 at 03:37 AM *softly smiling*.... you mean you still don't go whizzing down that hill.... even if only in memory? I loved this walk down memory lane... |
Posted by Cole Miller on 11/11/03 at 04:47 AM i too remember being envious of the kids with toboggans... aaaah... thanks for bringing back some fun times... |
Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 11/11/03 at 09:58 PM Hummmmmmm ... I love the first snow ... it's the best! Great trip down memory-lane! |
Posted by Siri Lipscomb on 11/12/03 at 02:34 AM Ah, those were days of innocence. You've made then so real, so well conveyed. We'd go off a ten foot bluff in a toboggan - whoosh, then thud. The ride was always worth the rattling. Thanks for the memory refresher... ~ S |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/12/03 at 07:09 PM Such warm memories on a cold winter's day! An excellent journey back to childhood that warms the soul as surely as the actual event frosted the cheeks. Great verse! |
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