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Another Baby Cried
by Siri LipscombAnother baby cried
During Erics feeding
Gurgling, happy infant
Joyously kept lying
Murmuring, nurturing on
Pristine quenching rosy
Succulent tit under veil
With xquisite yearning zeal 11/07/2003 Author's Note: Abece-what?
Posted on 11/07/2003
Copyright © 2024 Siri Lipscomb
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 11/09/03 at 07:20 PM wow. this took talent. like they said, didn't even notice it was an abe until the end. |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 11/11/03 at 05:44 PM *clapping profusely* Wonderful job, i have yet to attempt this abced-what? |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/12/03 at 05:30 PM A brilliant warm abcedee that has tremendous flow.... especially considering the restricted form! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 04/24/04 at 09:45 PM A remarkable command of the English language is required to accomplish this form to the extent you have. Precise and meaningfilled. Good stuff, Siri.
Pe4ce... |
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