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how it looks up here

by Leslie Ann Eisenberg


Perhaps you picture
A sky filled with cotton candy clouds and halos,
but it is red blood
soaking up the blue sponge
It is periwinkle taffy clouds
stretched
until they snap

It is endless circles of gold links,
but there are no fences or gates
There are no streets to walk upon,
only voices
to follow as you
move
slowly, blind

And it is wide open eyes,
A well of tears,
penny loafers and broken watches
It is big sky,
so big and orange and black and green
so big that I
cannot
wrap my arms
around it

But most of all, dear child
There is no breath
Up here
No sighs, no gasps

And so

I visit the ground
and
feel
your soft whispers
against my whiskers

10/26/2003

Author's Note: grandpa, i still remember, and i know you are watching over me, my guardian angel..and i am safe, always.

Posted on 11/06/2003
Copyright © 2024 Leslie Ann Eisenberg

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 11/19/03 at 05:20 PM

Down to earth. The message is so well pronounced.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/21/03 at 11:51 PM

Majestic images that are both fresh and unique. Great use of colors and emotions to flesh out this verse. Great read.

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