This Ring by Scott Cadence
I take this ring on and off
I strive too hard to become this fake
I spin it across the counter
Amazing how much is spinning to the edge
I ask myself should I stop or let it go
Doesnt everything eventually fall?
This is how I reason with myself
So lets talk about the cause of this mess
Hiding behind accomplishment
Are you fond of mental armor?
I have never seen your naked soul
Obviously body heat is not enough
To melt away years of soldering
There is just enough of you to give a name
But not enough to let go
I take this ring on and off
Not because of you
Simple because there is room for question
Room for doubt
All of which I will not find in anyone else
These questions are my own
I have the choice
to spin or wear this ring
11/06/2003 Posted on 11/06/2003 Copyright © 2025 Scott Cadence
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/06/03 at 08:31 AM wow...what a tough spot to be at. You really projected the feeling well. Absolutely great read. Hope you find your way out of this mental maze, cobwebbed with emotional strings. |
Posted by Traci Mabats on 11/06/03 at 03:02 PM wow, its scary how much truth there is in this poem. |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/10/03 at 08:10 PM This is a very poignant look at the internal scripts we have with ourselves and the effects they have on our own behavior and those that we interact with. Exquisite self-questioning that leaves the reader and the writer with only more questions. Great read and your form is excellent. |
Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 11/15/03 at 01:04 AM We all seem to get close to that edge sooner or later.I know I have many times...........decisions, decisions...excellent read |
Posted by Emily Sullivan on 11/19/03 at 01:22 AM i could place myself in this poem, i love when that happens! nice work..em |
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