04. to nintendo

by Jason Wardell

thank you, Nintendo
without your games i would have
attention span and


Author's Note: in the spirit of the "thank you" teen poetry contest, i wrote three senryu. i apologize for all of them.

Posted on 11/02/2003
Copyright © 2022 Jason Wardell

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 11/03/03 at 01:06 AM

like how it ends hehe

Posted by Cole Miller on 11/05/03 at 06:22 AM

i'll join the club by saying, huzzah this was great...

Posted by Rachelle Howe on 11/05/03 at 02:51 PM

ROFLMAO! *DIES LAUGHING* JESUS this is hilarious.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/05/03 at 11:24 PM

Exceedingly witty! I must admit I too and am love with Nintendo! Actually, playstation but that's

Posted by Traci Mabats on 11/06/03 at 02:25 AM

Eek, I remember Duck Hunt. Im so old. *wail

Posted by Lindsay Sanders on 11/06/03 at 03:29 AM

HAHA. you made me laugh. thanks.

Posted by Don Coffman on 11/06/03 at 07:59 AM

*claps* *grins* Great one, Wiley.

Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/06/03 at 08:22 AM

you're one funny dude!! hahahaha...this is so cool:)

Posted by Lauren Singer on 11/06/03 at 10:00 PM

hahahaha. yes!

Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 11/07/03 at 01:27 AM


Posted by Agnes Eva on 12/02/03 at 08:03 AM

heehee hee. i have no idea what the official publishing world would say about this one but it is cheeky and hilarious

Posted by Kalikala Smith on 01/08/04 at 03:48 AM


Posted by Paul Lastovica on 10/27/06 at 02:55 AM

what fun =) what would I do without my DS, and why can't I have a wii right this instant?

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