unravel the fingers of father time by Rachelle Howethe flame of my insides
lit your wick like a tombstone,
and you flickered there, dormant,
but alive, alive in your own transition.
it was the birthplace of the ancients,
i had sung your last diatribe. i had
inscribed your taste into the lining of my
subconscious and become enraptured
in the blood you blotted onto fickle skin.
the placement was irrelevant,
the last few lines and verbs had become
pivotal to this breadline, this silverline,
the lines you trekked upon my eyes and soul.
you sang to me, 'sleep now, dying angel,'
and wrapped your wings around the tick-tock-
drum, drum, of hearts and brainwaves and clocks.
time had become outdated.
time, the old man on the mountain,
would have no hold. 11/01/2003 Author's Note: i hath.. no idea. it just sorta'.. came out.
Posted on 11/01/2003 Copyright © 2024 Rachelle Howe
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 11/02/03 at 04:29 PM so so many great lines in this piece! I really love this one. |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/05/03 at 07:43 PM You just came out with some of the most incredible image combinations I have ever visualized! Absolutley splendid images that tripped through my head in such a dizzying fashion that I crave more! Great read! |
Posted by Don Coffman on 11/06/03 at 07:57 AM Telepathy would be an interesting experience with you around, seeing as you have such a talent for scenes and visual concepts. I really love that ending. *cheers for Rach* |
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