| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 11/01/03 at 04:41 AM I love the beauty and simplicty of Haiku... and think you do them the best of any I have read. This one... is superb! I too love the aurora... |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/01/03 at 01:51 PM Then I think Norwegian sky..and let my dreams take me away! Simply beautiful David! |
| Posted by Richard Paez on 11/01/03 at 03:20 PM Another excellent haiku David. I enjoy the progression, and the fact that credit is given where credit is due. If not for Father Sun's rage, the sky would be a boring place; and Mother Earth's magnetic embrace protects us in the most magically beautiful way. That you captured that magic in haiku so well deserves much respect. Thank you for sharing, as always. {m} |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 11/02/03 at 04:10 PM You saw it, didn't you? Lucky dawg! And then you wrote this. I envy your sight and I appreciate your description. Beautiful! |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 11/02/03 at 10:31 PM this is perfect... excellent form and beautiful message... blessings... |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/03/03 at 01:30 AM Excellent Dave. I picture it in my minds eye...Charlie |
| Posted by Lindsay Sanders on 11/03/03 at 04:38 AM beautiful. a glistening haiku. |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 11/03/03 at 06:25 AM gorgeous. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 11/03/03 at 11:48 PM awesome haiku...lovely |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 11/04/03 at 04:07 PM so much said in so few words ... Nice one David! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/05/03 at 02:21 AM Beautiful, I see the shifting, shining, brightly colored lights fill the sky! |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 11/17/03 at 10:50 AM Beautiful, and such a perfect subject for a haiku. |
