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Haiku #67......Joy

by Amanda L Marron

i've prayed for someone

like you to enter my life

you bring joy to me

10/28/2003

Posted on 10/28/2003
Copyright © 2024 Amanda L Marron

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/28/03 at 07:13 PM

Beautiful. I love the way that you state joy as being an answered prayer. A prayer for human companionship. This mixes the earthly and the divine in a way that implies that it takes both to truly recieve joy. Exquisite verse.

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