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He Said - haiku

by Emily Sullivan

"I would kill for you"
arms wrapped around me on that
stark, stiff motel bed

10/27/2003

Posted on 10/28/2003
Copyright © 2025 Emily Sullivan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Cole Miller on 10/28/03 at 02:38 AM

this poem makes you wish it were longer than just seventeen syllables.. makes you want more details... well written..

Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/16/03 at 12:31 PM

haunting haiku! you don't even need a title for these, and I think the poem stands fine without.

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