| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/26/03 at 01:42 PM The waves seems to be coming from the outer space influencing what is of our space. But it doesn't stop.It transcends this space.This looks like a two way communication.The law of vibration dictating what is and the relative what is communicating with the outer world. Good to see a visual poem. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/26/03 at 05:47 PM Biofeedback flow with alliterative undertow. Synchronized symphony of seraphim soaked syllables! |
| Posted by Susan Q Tomas on 10/30/03 at 02:18 PM This poem is fantastic in many ways. I am a visual person, so I found it delightfull. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/25/09 at 10:43 PM I found this by sheer persistence. Thank heaven. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/25/09 at 10:45 PM I meant to say, how awesome. I was busy agapeing also. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 04/04/11 at 03:18 AM Um yeah. As a person who is very fond of visual poetry, I adore this. Fantastic. |
