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Too Soon
by Siri LipscombToo soon did I deceive
Myself by being
Willing to believe
That I was seeing
LOVE
10/25/2003 Posted on 10/25/2003
Copyright © 2025 Siri Lipscomb
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 10/27/03 at 08:21 AM Short and simple, but in being so makes the sentiment more effective. A nifty lil creation of words. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 10/27/03 at 01:11 PM Your succinct stylism certainly plays upon the mind, Siri. Somehow, I would much rather be decieved be love, than led to believe in the alternative.
Peace... |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/27/03 at 04:54 PM amen. o.O and i'm with don. nice. |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 10/29/03 at 09:28 PM this is a familiar feeling. Current and familiar. Much pain in such a short piece. Nice job. |
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