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Lost (Abecedarian)
by J. P. DaviesAching, beating, confessional.
Dashboard eats feelings gratefully.
Hands in jeopardy.
Kids laughing, Myself numb
Obvious proprietor, quiet
reserved salesman.
True unions versus
Wantings...Xenophobe
Youthful Zealot.10/23/2003 Posted on 10/23/2003
Copyright © 2024 J. P. Davies
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| Posted by Barbara Griffith on 10/23/03 at 07:47 PM Everyone uses Xenophobe :D. This is interesting, but rather hard to tell your general subject. Some lines are kind of sudden "Dashboard eats feelings gratefully." While a great line, I don't really see how it fits in with the rest of the poem. |
| Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 10/24/03 at 12:29 AM I agree with barbara, but maybe I'm just not being deep :P. *shrugs* I like it though, it has nice flow. |
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