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cheap-day excretion - preparation

by Laura Doom

Words are washing over me 
 in pleasant waves of conversation 
  streams of endless information 
   flowing to the empty sea 

    dreams are drifting carelessly 
     on wings of broken promises 
     elusive wispered images 
    in sleepy draughts of reverie 

    vacant smiles evaporate 
    from faces hung with tired expressions 
     twisted chains of thought, obsessions 
      decorative opiates 

       routine cares like cold compresses 
        shrink the time and slow the pace
         the anaesthetic, mindless trace 
         of consciousness as it undresses 

         nothing here that makes no sense 
          no scents to stimulate the senses 
           squatting under false pretences 
            no-one claiming recompense 

             words are washing over me 
              do I pretend to welcome dawn 
              or find the energy to yawn 
              and swallow up this lethargy

              fallow fingers of attention
             sow the seeds of dissolution
            drowning in my own pollution
          gagging
       choking
     past redemption

   worlds are washing over me
a fade of flashdance fire beneath the soporific sea...

05/21/2002

Posted on 10/21/2003
Copyright © 2024 Laura Doom

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Madeline Pestolesi on 10/21/03 at 11:34 PM

Awesome!

Posted by Susan Q Tomas on 10/22/03 at 02:45 PM

This is quite moving. The end of it makes me exhale. I will definitely be browsing through your library,

Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/26/03 at 03:44 PM

It rolls like a mantra. Great verse that really gets you thinking. Complex form that seems simple and natural. :)

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