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Old Shoes

by Ken Harnisch

I listen patiently,

Which is not my wont;

You ramble on,

Which is not your way.

 

We have come to that place

Where old shoes fit most

Comfortably on feet

Too tired to try too many on

 

Though it annoys me to hear

You whine, and you, to know

I am so annoyed, still

There is something like

A warm quilt on a November night

That blankets us when we

Talk.

 

The hours go by

And I think you can hear it

When I roll my eyes;

Still:

The old shoes don’t squeak

When we walk in them

And we seem to walk

More often

These long and lonely nights

 

10/06/2003

Posted on 10/21/2003
Copyright © 2024 Ken Harnisch

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 10/21/03 at 10:53 PM

it suits the couple in the movie I just watched today, Polish Wedding, on tv. Too bad long relationships (or some short ones) have to acquire those negatives, though, and can't just grow comfy without them. Well written as always, Ken.

Posted by Christina Bruno on 01/05/09 at 01:43 AM

well written piece, and i like the metaphor. :)

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