| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 10/20/03 at 11:18 AM Oh, wow. Leaves me speechless. |
| Posted by Christina Gleason on 10/22/03 at 12:49 PM bare skin = ripe peaches, that's awesome. nice (creepy) f'in image. |
| Posted by Jolie Jordan on 10/22/03 at 07:13 PM This is astounding. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 10/23/03 at 01:50 AM oh my dear...this poem rocks... |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 10/23/03 at 07:08 AM wow..not sure what to say now...felt like a cold shower, a wake-up-now message! Great read...absolutely great read. |
| Posted by Christina Gleason on 09/15/04 at 11:19 AM still an absolute favorite. I love you! |
| Posted by Lindsay Sanders on 09/16/04 at 02:37 AM dear aaron,
this is tingling & cutting at the same time. the imagery in it makes me want to scream & the depth & truth of it makes me want to cry. this poem is exquisite, a new favorite & a perfect pick for POTD.
<3,
lindsay |
| Posted by Christina Gleason on 08/17/05 at 01:14 AM this is still one of my favorite poems of yours, if not my #1 favorite. so f'in fantastic. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 02/04/07 at 12:20 PM So vivid a picture and another one for my favorites. |
| Posted by David Maurice on 11/23/12 at 05:50 AM I have read this site since 2003, and this is still the very best poem I've seen. |
