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Lethargic Mind

by Christel Crews

Apathy beginning,
continuously destroying.
Enough from guilt,
heaven imploring.
Just kindling lethargic minds,
nothing opening,
posing questions.
Relentlessly searching,
torment unites vision.
Wistful xylophone
yonder zephyr...


Author's Note: hehehe... i just had to try my hand at this form of poetry- its quite fascinating and fun to attempt. does it make sense to you? it does to me, but i have a twisted mind... if not, just sing with me "ABCD.."

Posted on 10/19/2003
Copyright © 2019 Christel Crews

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ginette T Belle on 10/21/03 at 04:42 PM

it's lovely...

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 12/14/03 at 02:37 AM

Not bad. Rather meaningful. Feel good. Nice ABCD.

Posted by Vere Mantratriad on 05/15/06 at 06:29 PM

I tried an ABCD once... they're really difficult, aren't they? I think you pulled this off rather well.

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