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Burning Desires of Late *mature audience only*
by Amanda L Marroni still get a rush of excitement every time i'm with you
you're the only person who knows me thoroughly
inside as well as out
you know what turns me on
makes me melt, makes me tick
you stroke your hands over my body so softly
laying me down beneath you
covering my body with yours
i hold my breath as you enter
your sword into my sheath
our desires burning brighter with every stroke
i could go on all night
i suckle that spot on your neck
the spot that i know makes you go wild
its been so long since my legs were wrapped around you
and all you could think about was pleasing me
though everyone tells me, i shouldn't go running back
i do and i run right back to you
to the one person who has always made me feel beautiful
who puts my pleasure above his own
i still wish we had a chance with a relationship 10/11/2003 Author's Note: doesnt it suck realizing that you're not over your first love?? the one person who you thought you were finally over??
Posted on 10/11/2003
Copyright © 2024 Amanda L Marron
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 10/13/03 at 02:12 PM I think this is fantastic. I do think there are a bit too many "extra" words diverting the focus on the actions and thoughts. But overall this is a beautiful read. |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/14/03 at 02:36 PM i like. and ya, it does suck. i played that game with my ex forever. um, i'm with quin. there are some words that could be trimmed to keep it more distinct, though... hm. it would put a different spin. |
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