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immolated

by John Ilotan

Immolated
by your touch

my desire
is such
a conflagration
a maelstrom of heat

lit
by the
smouldering touch
of your lips
to my fingertips


(I'm smokin' baby)

10/08/2003

Posted on 10/08/2003
Copyright © 2019 John Ilotan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Vimal Rony on 10/12/03 at 06:32 PM

Very well written but i must say not as impactful as some of ur other works.May be i expect too much everytime u write hehe.

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