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Raving Madness

by Brian Francis

The gathering commences
as the rattle of a key silences
the waiting crowd.

Doors fly open
Swallowing, one by one,
young, lean, decorated bodies.

The phone number was dead
Just a few hours ago.
No answer to the ringing.

Then the message came
A warehouse was announced
The party was on -- rush, rush, rush

South of Euclid Street near the river
Behind the building painted red
Double wide green doors
the sign of Apollo marks the place

Lasers shoot across the expanse
Echoing from mirrors
hidden in darkness.
Ricocheting through the air
Silently screaming by

The jarring waves of techno
Assail and assault the mind
As bodies wreathe in delight
In a sexual and sensual dance

Images flow together
In the darkness
shattered by the strobes
Pulsing energy absorbs
Inhibitions and releases desire

The dance comes from within
First trickling out in slow movements
Then slowly swelling to a flood
And engulfing so completely

The bodies tortured and adorned
With metal piercings
Jerk and twist in spasmodic expression

The edges - the walls attract the lurkers
Trippers and hawks of every kind
Watching the darkness through the flashes.

The bodies touching creating ecstasy
ancient emotions taking control
Instincts as old as man

Eye candy dances on the walls
Laser portraits and designs
Projections through colored acetate

Song and rhythm fading into each other
Minutes and hours passing with the beat
Until the sunrise and reality
















10/08/2003

Posted on 10/08/2003
Copyright © 2024 Brian Francis

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/09/03 at 02:29 PM

i've lived this. you put my life on paper. weird. regardless, the tempo and flow of this is awesome, i love the wordplay of the rushrushrush....

Posted by David R Spellman on 10/10/03 at 12:18 PM

You've cretainly managed to create quite the vivid scene here. The different aspects of the laser were done very well and the primal emotions quite evocatively.

Posted by Kate Demeree on 10/10/03 at 03:02 PM

Ummm... the dancer in me responded to the scene... and the deeper core of me responded to the ending. Funny isn't it how the dawn can bring something totally different than the night. This poem has a way of bringing both. Great Read!

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