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by Ginette T Belle

foaming milk coffee
swept over with chocolate
white tea cup on tile

10/06/2003

Posted on 10/07/2003
Copyright © 2024 Ginette T Belle

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/07/03 at 09:19 PM

Oops... the title is an exquisite lead in to this work. Exceptional imagery!

Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/08/03 at 10:16 PM

Eeka. burns. everywhere. i spilled coffee once, awhile back. everywhere. heh. heh. anyway. :) i am definitely with max: I love the title, and the words that follow. i hate haiku, but i can stand yours for some reason. ;)

Posted by Kara Hayostek on 10/10/03 at 04:54 PM

Cute, happens to me all the time (had to replace many rr modems that way)

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