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Don't Flatter Yourself (haiku form)
by Quinlan L GibsonIf you learn one thing.
In knowing that I WANT you.
It is NOT a need. 10/06/2003 Author's Note: deserved shout out to Kristin Anderson for the haiku "slap in the face" inspiration on this...
Posted on 10/06/2003
Copyright © 2024 Quinlan L Gibson
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| Posted by Laura Doom on 10/06/03 at 09:43 PM Yes, I found it straitforward, and good, but I felt the title suggested a reversal of the WANT and need roles - but that's just my perspective I guess :o] |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 10/07/03 at 03:32 AM strong point stated! Great one Quin!! |
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