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Twenty-Seven Pounds (An exaggeration)

by Madeline Pestolesi

Creaking with the weight
Of twenty-seven pounds
The Victoria's Secret angel bra
Gently sways with my footsteps.

10/05/2003

Author's Note: I was going to make this longer, but I like it how it is. It's might be a good haiku if I changed it a little.

Posted on 10/06/2003
Copyright © 2024 Madeline Pestolesi

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 10/06/03 at 07:24 AM

The size is fine the way it is. It doesnt need to subscribe to a specific form, and I think it works well, and gave me a nice laugh

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