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Compromising With Myself

by Cole Miller

They say that once
You're at the top
Theres no where to
Go but down
They say that when
You're at the bottom
You can only go
One way; up
So how about
YOU go down
And I'll go up
We can MEet
In the middle

10/05/2002

Author's Note: not sure on dates, this is an old piece a bit about how my manic side and my depressed side kind of balance off sometimes.....

Posted on 10/06/2003
Copyright © 2020 Cole Miller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 10/07/03 at 10:36 PM

nicely pointing out an obvious...good job.

Posted by Richard Paez on 12/23/03 at 03:00 PM

I very much like the way this was done, especially the you/I/me. A great message and read :) Thanks for sharing it! {m}

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