Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/05/03 at 03:16 PM An exceptional piece that sets the mood for this autumn season. Full of motion and emotion, it is beautiful, earthy, and natural. Blessings! |
Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 10/05/03 at 03:34 PM this is like the blooming of a flower and the ripening of fruit! It's full of a woman's touch...thus well respected. |
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/05/03 at 04:35 PM This is like a harvest song. So natural and down to earth.Full of life. |
Posted by Adrian Calhoun on 10/08/03 at 05:08 AM Excellent writing. Brilliant imagery. Almost an impish quality here. I really enjoyed reading this. |
Posted by Ken Harnisch on 10/08/03 at 09:13 PM wonderfully alliterative and whispering of early October...and it's promise |
Posted by David R Spellman on 10/09/03 at 02:01 PM Really beautiful Kate, with a subdued passion and surely does fit the season wonderfully. |
Posted by Michelle Calhoun on 10/10/03 at 06:25 PM Excellent work!!!! I love the wonderful use of nature and vivid imagery. A great harvest poem. And one of my favourites. |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/10/03 at 08:09 PM So fitting the season. A wonderful read aloud.
"Let's ride with the wind in misty cloud
Hearing the whispers and whimpering sound
Of harvest night's darkened gloom
As we gaily dance in the harvest room." |