the dreadful dawning i just realised shadow-dancing sunset slide from here on it's all downhill wild-flower whispers wilt time for us to sleep
10/05/2003
Posted on 10/05/2003Copyright © 2024 Laura Doom
The use of "dawning" and "sunset" in the same verse gives that sense of time ticking down to death --especially after saying its "downhill". Great verse that can be taken in multiple ways.
Interestngly done with the weaving of the two together. Multi-faceted and thought provoking.
